SHIRLEY
I thought you said it was all a dream.
LAVERNE
I think it was a dream. Don't you think I would remember if I had done it? Bells would ring.. trumpets would sound... I didn't hear nothing...
This is relatively explicit, and sad, since Laverne presumably didn't reach orgasm.
Scene E takes us back to the present, in the "girls' living room - morning - day." Edna having specifically five kids was added, and for some reason it was originally Edna's second baby, rather than her first, that she found out about on the street, although I think first makes more sense. Otherwise, the scene is intact.
Next time, the big proposal scene (12 pages)....
Oof, poor Laverne!
ReplyDeleteYep. I mean, it's a messed up situation anyway, but yeah.
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